Chiklis
Awaaaaaaaaaaay!
Posted
07:34 (GMT) 15th December 2012 by David J. Bishop
I
would like to stick with the superhero theme of my last couple of
rants, if I may, to tell you about a bad superhero TV show that
is loads of fun to watch. It's a called No Ordinary Family.
When last I checked, which was admittedly a few months ago, it was
still being advertised in this country as a hit new show, whereas
in America it was cancelled after its first series, which should
make getting into it in this country a spectacular waste of time.
And it's not MST3K bad, nor is it half as good as the genuine
hits and frankly excellent shows coming out of America, which are
already too numerous to watch in one lifetime without adding something
mediocre to the heap. They say that generic and bland works of art
are the hardest to review, since you can't dish out praise or scorn
on them and they're difficult to form a persuasive recommendation
for. Well, buckle up because I'm going to try to do both at the
same time: collect everything that's bad about No
Ordinary Family into one rant
and in so doing persuade you to watch it. Let's do this.
No
Ordinary Family
is a show executive produced by Michael Chiklis, starring Chiklis
and it's about a man named Chiklis—
Okay,
I can't remember his character's name. There are some character
names that stay with you your whole life, not because they're better
written names but because the characters endure after you finish
watching. Marty McFly, Han Solo, Anton Ego, Pai Mei. Then there's
Chiklis. Even when the show was constantly reminding me of Chiklis's
name with awkward "My husband, your father, Chiklis," lines I still
couldn't hold onto it from one scene to the next so my girlfriend
and I just called him Chiklis and I suggest you do the same.
Look,
just because this was a cute little in-joke my girlfriend and I
had, that doesn't mean you can't use it too. The other day I (jokingly)
asked her if she wanted to see Real Steel and she didn't
understand what I meant until I said Rock 'Em Sock 'Em Robots
(because who are we kidding?). Calling things by their incorrect
name pseudo-intentionally is great fun and tremendously freeing.
Next time you find yourself talking about Star Wars Episode
Two, try casually calling it Send in the Clones. Wasn't
that fun? It's derisive, it's subtle and, if you think about it,
it's actually a remarkably apt summary of the story. So Chiklis?
Just call him Chiklis. Chiklis can lift men over his head. Chiklis
can punch through walls. Chiklis can jump hella
high. Go, Chiklis, go!
In
fact, speaking of Rock 'Em Sock 'Em Robots (the trailer
for which even shows a robot's head being punched off), let's just
get this out of the way now. No
Ordinary Family
is about a family of four who gain superpowers in an accident. It's
exactly like The Fantastic Four, they just replaced
their space capsule with a plane and cosmic rays with weird glowy
God-knows-what in a lake somewhere in the jungle. For all I know
it was cosmic rays.
And
wait, wasn't Chiklis in The Fantastic Four? I know he was
under a ton of goofy monster makeup that didn't look a thing (hem
hem) like his character but that was Chiklis under there,
right? They didn't swap in Kiera Knightley without telling anybody,
did they? How could he have not noticed the parallels? Do you think
when they were filming the ‘get powers in accident' scene
he suddenly thought, "Hey, this all seems weirdly familiar. Maybe
I had a dream about making this show and then forgot it," or was
he thinking, "Yes! Fuck you, Reed Richards! Now it's Chiklis's time
to shine!"
It
would be unfair to call No
Ordinary Family ‘Fantastic
Four the TV Show' but this much should be painfully obvious
from just watching the trailer, perhaps even from just hearing the
pitch: there is no way this programme would exist without The
Fantastic Four, The Incredibles and Heroes.
You've got the central premise of a family trying to balance day-to-day
domestic worries with battling supervillains (played for comedy)
and you've got people coming to terms with new powers in secret
and responding to their newfound gifts in different ways (played
for drama). The only problem is that whilst both of those premises
work well separately, when you put them together you get a story
about a family refusing to come together to fight crime.
You
see, series one of Heroes was essentially an X-men
origin story. Through random mutation, people all over the world
discover they have extraordinary abilities. That should be familiar
enough. But whilst X-men started off with the team of mutants
already in place, Heroes concerned itself with how such a team comes
together in the first place. The characters start off by exploring
their powers and identities in isolation but gradually as the series
develops their fates become intertwined, they share common goals,
they spend more time in proximity with more characters and it becomes
a pop rocks and coke game of "Ooh, what happens when that guy
faces off against that guy?" No
Ordinary Family
does the same thing… but with The Fantastic Four.
Can you see the flaw in this? They're already close to one another,
their fates are already intertwined, they already share goals because
they bloody well live together! They're a married couple and two
kids! So, here's what we get. The following all happens for no reason
at all. At all? At all:
- They
don't tell each other they have powers.
- They
solve problems independently, even when it's obvious they could
benefit from another family member's help.
- They
never ever share information with the people who would most benefit
from it.
- They
each identify the same problems independent of one another but
then do nothing to solve them.
- They
never pursue personal goals when they obviously have the means.
- In
fact, sometimes characters will act like complete imbeciles when
just an episode or even a scene ago they were being perfectly
rational, but now it's their turn to hold the idiot
ball.
But
let's not be naïve. We already know why the writers are having
the characters act this way. It's a simple case of "I want my story
to play out like this", "I don't want him to know that yet" and
"I don't want the characters to do that" so instead characters –
sometimes consistently and sometimes inconsistently – do the
opposite of what someone smart enough to brush their teeth without
blinding themselves would do.
The
most consistent example is Chiklis's decision to fight crime without
a superhero costume of any kind, because the show's creators don't
want to do the whole ‘brightly-coloured costume' thing and
not because it's a good idea.
In
fact, although the show is quick to invoke Batman and his ilk as
a conceptual short-hand in place of real world-building, No
Ordinary Family
best serves as an example of what not to do. Or, to paraphrase
Paradise Lost, to justify the ways of Batman to men. Anyone
who would argue that The Dark Knight was an edgy crime
drama ruined by the presence of a character as innately silly as
Batman really needs to watch No
Ordinary Family.
It turns out that dressing up as a giant bat is not as preposterous
as any of us thought.
A good
half of the No
Ordinary Family
episodes are about Chiklis fighting crime and in every single damn
one of those the conflict arises from Chiklis refusing to hide his
identity in any way:
•
He has to flee from every crime scene before anyone sees him
• He is mistaken for a criminal by a victim
• A police sketch is released of his face (even though
he's the sketch artist who created the picture)
• He's caught on camera by his boss performing
a physically impossible rescue
• In an alternative timeline (don't ask) his entire
family are hunted down and captured by the government when Chiklis
spazzes out and flips over a car before a crowd of hundreds.
• The one time he disguises himself by wearing a simple
balaclava the bad guy just pulls it off
• And then, because that guy worked for the mob, they
come after his family.
Theses
are all problems that could be solved by rocking up in a plastic
cowl. Well, being the clever person you are, you might point out
at this point that just wearing a mask the bad guys can't take off
doesn't solve the problem of victims mistaking you for a criminal.
Well, slow down. You're absolutely right. Instead of being anonymous
the smart thing would be to create a second identity that
is instantly recognisable so that everybody — citizenry, constabulary
and criminals alike — knows whose side you're on... and so
nobody bothers you when you're queuing at the dry cleaner's or tries
to give your kids a pair of concrete Heelys.
Batman,
you are a frigging genius.
Chiklis,
you are… not.
We've
talked enough about Chiklis the character, what of Chiklis the actor?
Well, one of the most prominent reasons to watch this programme
and one of the most consistently funny things about it is Chiklis's
performance. Poor acting choices aside, his appearance alone is
distracting enough to render any audience-member incapable of taking
the programme seriously. Whilst he's quite convincing as a recently-disappointed
baby, Chiklis is completely unconvincing as a man who can break
through walls with his fist. The flab-to-muscle ratio veered into
the flab zone some time ago, unfortunately. Still, he didn't have
to be a physical paragon for this to work just as long as he was
a hard-ass on the inside.
But
instead – and I don't know if this is misaimed comedy or what
– Chiklis makes the decision to play the character as sensitively
as possible. No, sensitive is the wrong word. Soft. Almost snivelling.
At any given time he will either panic, have his feelings hurt or
do something so mushy you want to be sick down the back of your
sofa, and that's compounded by a one-note performance that amounts
to perpetually pulling a face as if he's about to burst into tears
- and that just makes him look even more like a baby. I'll be honest
with you: this is a side of Chiklis I've never seen before and it's
not really one I'd care to see again. Come back, goofy Thing make-up!
All is forgiven!
And
please don't get me wrong. I'm a sensitive guy, I don't think someone
who cries every time he watches The Iron Giant can really
claim otherwise, and I don't think shedding some tears makes you
any less of a man, but for fuck's sake there's a time and a place
for it. People – men and women alike – should be able
to get through at least one day a week without tears before bedtime.
Chiklis loses his shit over the stupidest things. They make a big
thing of his trying to prepare breakfast for his wife and kids as
they rush to work or school, but then they hurry off without eating
a bite, leaving poor Chiklis standing alone in the kitchen with
a frying pan in his hand and a crestfallen expression on his face.
I'm just saying, you'd never see Batman's lower lip trembling because
nobody wants to eat his signature scrambled eggs.
None
of this changes even after Chiklis gains his super strength and
deep-seated aversion for effective disguises, so the show becomes
about Chiklis trying to reconcile being a powerhouse of physical
aptitude with his soft, hysterical nature. At any rate, before the
pilot episode has drawn to a close Chiklis has decided to use his
powers to dish out his own brand of vigilante-style justice... mostly
in broad daylight. His wife Stephanie, on the other hand, decides
not to. She recognizes that fighting crime is important but decides
that looking after her idiot brood of super teenagers is more important.
Although
actually, now I think about it, we never see her hang out with them
– seriously, I think the actress refused to work with children
or something – so I guess her super-parenting amounts to knocking
out some incredible roast dinners and staying out of everyone's
way. And wait, that was "Scrambled Eggs" Chiklis's role
before the accident. I suppose the idea is that Stephanie is just
supposed to cook the dinners and this is a return to how
things should be? Or is it just that now she has super-speed she
should do the cooking because she's innately better at it? Either
interpretation doesn't really paint a good picture in terms of gender
roles.
Anyway,
the man goes out and beats people up, the woman stays at home and
does housework because she's better suited for the job. The super-speed
just turns her into a one-joke character, in the same way that Helen
Parr could have been but wasn't.
We've
all seen enough superhero films to know that people with powers
can be used to deliver a potent metaphor. X-men was about
gay rights. The first Spider-man, in which Peter Parker
copes with his body's changes, notices wall-crawling barbs where
there were no barbs before and furtively coats his bedroom walls
with webbing, was about puberty. The Incredibles is obviously
about mid-life crisis.
Stephanie's
power represents the fact that she is a busy working mother. Unfortunately,
it's also her only personality trait. Her whole character is cynically
designed as consolation for hard-working mothers. It's impossible
to watch without getting the impression the show is screaming at
you:
Women!
Do you feel rushed off your feet trying to look after your kids
whilst preparing dinner for your husband and working a full time
job as a leading biochemist for a huge corporation? Well, here's
a woman who literally races around faster than the speed of sound
balancing all that. I bet you can relate to her, right? I bet you
feel like you have to be The Flash just to get the kids to hockey
practice, eh?
I don't
know why that voice became Canadian by the end.
The
point is you can't relate to her, even if you are in the key demographic
she's been designed to cater to, because if you're a rushed and
perpetually multitasking working mother, odds are you don't have
super-speed. Stephanie, on the other hand, does and therefore has
none of your problems. She can have it all and put in no effort
whatsoever, so the metaphor completely breaks down. It's just a
dumb visual joke that barely works once.
And
it would be fine if she started off in the kitchen making scrambled
eggs and gaining superpowers gave her the freedom to broaden her
horizons and have an adventure but, like I said, that's Chiklis's
arc. Stephanie takes the opposite route – she goes from being
a working mother who doesn't have time to make her family dinner
to being one that does.
That's
the fulfilment of her destiny. Chiklis gains super-strength and
a healing factor and every episode he's getting run over and jumping
over buildings and shot at by jewel thieves. Stephanie is fast enough
to insult you and kick you in the crotch before the sound waves
reach your ears and she wastes it on the most frivolous bullshit.
Because that's all the writers can think to do with her.
She
just runs around a track really fast and, her metabolism having
dramatically changed due to all her running, she eats an entire
plate of muffins in fast motion. Superman has speed, sister. He
uses it to catch bullets, not to needlessly show off and eat cakes.
You got one of the more useful powers. Just look at your kids, with
their stupid ‘we don't have a budget for invisibility or fire-starting'
powers. You got lucky, why do you just make dinner really fast over
and over?
Like
Chilis's refusal to wear a costume, Stephanie will no doubt churn
the guts of superhero enthusiasts with frustration. At least Chiklis
is out there flailing around trying to save lives and help people,
she's just waiting on the sidelines poised in case someone needs
a meal at ten seconds' notice. And all those people getting mugged,
raped and murdered, sometimes all in one night? Those people she
could be helping right now? Fuck those guys. She's got a meatloaf
to stick in the oven.
I suppose
with great power comes great cooking.
What
about the Chiklis kids, what powers did they get anyway? Like I
said, they got the budget powers, the powers that don't tax the
effects team. For Daphne the teenage girl, that means reading minds
and, later, implanting commands in people's heads. Why, yes, that
is exactly like Parkman from Heroes, thank you
for noticing. But whilst it may not look like much (which is why
they used it), in the absence of a Sylar or a Peter Petrelli, mind-reading
and mind-control combine to make single most insanely powerful ability
any superhero can have, so Daphne turns into a walking plot hole.
There is barely a single problem or enemy the family encounters
that you could not easily solve with some mixture of mind control
and mind-reading. She would be even better at fighting crime than
either of her parents – in fact, she could just force criminals
to punch themselves in the face and thus make the crime fight itself
– but she and her brother have both inherited their mother's
complete lack of social responsibility so they normally get relegated
to a limbo of perpetual B-plots where nothing they do ever touches
upon the series' main storyline and antagonist (more on him in a
moment). Still, at least Daphne gets do useful things with
her power, like find out when people are lying and uncovering juicy
secrets. She even tries to help people sometimes, in a low-key high
school way, instead of just stuffing her face with cakes.
Finally
there's JJ. JJ is an idiot. Even in a world of the idiots, JJ is
the idiot of idiots. If in the kingdom of the blind the one-eyed
man is king, then JJ has negative-one eyes. Before the accident,
JJ is almost too dumb to be able to function. Then he becomes a
genius. Sadly, like Good Will Hunting before him, his writers
are not geniuses and he in no way behaves like a typical genius.
He just gains the ability to memorise long quotations by rote, which
actually anyone can train themselves to do. So he's an idiot who
can think and act like a normal person. I suppose his inspiration
was Daredevil?
The
only other ways the show represents JJ's so-called genius is by
having him read books and play chess and, when the budget will allow,
seeing calculations in the air like an accountant with synaesthesia.
He covers the screen with glowing numbers and diagrams just before
doing something he probably wouldn't be able to predict, even in
a mathematically abstract setting. Yes, just like in the show Numbers
or, to a lesser extent, the film A Beautiful Mind. JJ's
power is he can see in plagiarism-o-vision.
Worse,
he still manages – somehow – to act like a moron, sometimes
due to the confines of idiot plot, sometimes because he's just that
dumb. Yes, for a super-genius JJ really does make some head-slammingly
bad decisions.
For
example, he refuses to tell his parents that he has powers. I mean,
they all keep their powers secret but JJ keeps his charade up for
several episodes, long after everyone else is comparing notes on
god-like omnipotence. He eventually tells his sister why he's keeping
his power secret: he wants them to judge his accomplishments on
their own merits, not as the product of their remarkable accident.
JJ wants them to think that he's naturally smart but not super-smart.
He wants them to love him for himself, not for his powers.
But
here's the thing, he really is that smart now. It's not a trick,
he can just work that stuff out with his brain. And there's no distinction
anymore between JJ the boy and JJ the power-haver. Especially in
his case, where JJ's identity, his soul, his psyche - whatever -
if it exists anywhere, it is categorically housed inside his brain
and the powers he's gained all pertain to his brain. So the powers
are an innate part of who JJ is now, there's no getting around that.
So it leads the show into some very abstract and metaphysically
dubious conversations about JJ's lying, because he wants his parents
to think he's smart but not because he's super-smart but because
he's smart-smart and he wants them to like him for himself, the
self that isn't smart, even though that same self really is exactly
that smart. And somehow football is involved.
Then
when he does demonstrate his freakishly apt calculation skills,
they start to think maybe he's on the drugs. So they sit him down
and question him. They say: JJ you're really smart now. Do you have
superpowers. And JJ says "No! Of course I don't!" and storms off.
This
scene is repeated two or three times, without the plot being advanced.
Chiklis and wife discuss this - one of them suspects he's lying,
the other thinks they should trust him. The question is frequently
raised of whether JJ is smart or whether he has super-powers, as
if these two things are in any way mutually exclusive.
Finally,
after everyone trying to follow this has contracted a headache,
JJ owns up and tells them he does have powers AND he's smart –
and despite his original misgivings they're really proud, as if
he was smart or something. Yeah, it makes no fucking sense.
The
irony is, throughout these scenes they're pretty damn well accusing
him of being a genius – this is his chance to own up since
the penny's already dropped, it's either this or he's abusing drugs
behind the bicycle shed. And yet he refuses to admit it. And of
course he's right – he's not a genius, he is a fucking
dipshit because only a fucking dipshit would act this way.
Or, as he puts it, "I've got like the superbrain!" Way to go, champ.
Superbrain indeed.
By
the way, the only reason JJ's parents think he's on drugs in the
first place is because it's suggested by JJ's teacher, Mr Litchfield,
a man with a mean-spirited disposition and gigantic weirdy eyebrows
that look like they could survive independently of their master.
This
character doesn't make any sense either; he just hates JJ. He hates
him recklessly, madly. He can never make it through a scene without
saying something cutting about JJ or accusing him of wrongdoing
without any proof, and many other grossly unprofessional things
a teacher would never ever do. There is nothing JJ can achieve or
aspire to that Mr Weirdy-Eyebrows won't try to crush. He goes out
of his way to try to destroy JJ's life on a daily basis. And why?
Damned if I know!
Then
there's Stephanie's disparaging colleague Dr Chiles; he doesn't
make sense either. He's just there to provide vague antagonism at
her place of work. Here's a scene from the pilot and these are the
actual lines of dialogue that they use:
Stephanie:
Amid the untold resources of the Amazon basin we have uncovered
perhaps the Crown Jewel, the Trilsetum Coronis.
Chiles: A plant? (Everyone looks at him.) You're wasting
the board's time on a plant?
Stephanie: Carbon-14 dating traces the Trilsetum Coronis back to
the Pleistocene Epoch and as we know that was–
Chiles: Well I stand corrected, you're wasting the board's time
on a really old plant.
Then
Stephanie goes on to explain that the plant has practical applications
in the pharmaceuticals industry, paper manufacturing and alternative
fuels, that it is, in fact, a wonder plant! Yet every time we see
him after that all he has to say is "Ooh look it's the lady with
the stupid dumb old plant!"
Is
this what they thought realistic workplace politics looks like?
Stephanie is a scientist - what kind of scientist is never made
totally clear, presumably she is either a chemist or a biochemist.
She talks about the plant's DNA, for example, and we already know
that the company is making medicine out of chemicals found in at
least one plant. This isn't the hardest thing in the world to wrap
one's head around. It's only to be assumed that the scientists working
alongside her have at least some passing knowledge of, well, science.
Are we to believe that there's a chemist who doesn't realise that
plants are made of chemicals? That you might be able to get at those
chemicals and use them to make new things? According to the internet,
there are at least 120 distinct chemical substances derived from
plants that are considered to be important drugs currently in use
in one or more countries in the world. And even if you didn't know
that - which a scientist working for a company developing new pharmaceuticals
most assuredly would - it's also used as the go-to sprinkling of
science flim-flam for every 'people on an expedition to the jungle'
plot in film and TV for the last 10 years. It used to be something
- anything - that was radioactive or from the moon. Today it's a
rare orchid that reverses the aging process or a previously-undiscovered
kind of herb that cures liver disease. And this guy sitting in the
middle of the board room just calls it a waste of time on the basis
that it is a plant. And he isn't fired on the spot.
But
the absolutely best What the Fuck character – the best character
full stop – is Dr King, the series' arch-villain. With his
grey hair and sharp suit he looks a bit like a cross between Alec
Baldwin and the Devil. He drinks whiskey, sits in the dark, watches
the family on computer monitors in a way which suggests (for the
duration of that episode) that he knows their secret, then he gives
sinister-sounding orders to his minions… and does nothing.
Literally, nothing the whole show. I mean, he sends a goon to kill
two characters we never cared about, and in so doing advances his
grand plan not a single iota. Only we don't know what his plan is
at that point and I'm not sure if the main characters ever find
out that he was behind the killings. He does things, he says things
and we don't know why until the last couple of episodes, when it
all becomes clear... that the writers knew just as little as us.
I suppose
killing people still counts as doing stuff, even if he has no reason
to have those people murdered. But other than those two brief moments,
the villain gets nothing done. So Dr King wins the award for the
most ineffectual villain of all time.
Let
me explain, if I can. Dr King has clearly been written by someone
who likes the kind of villain who doesn't tear people's throats
out with his teeth but instead sits next to them at a dinner part
and quietly unravels their lives through Machiavellian genius
disguised by a charming veneer of polite sophistication…
except our writer never realised you need to include the Machiavellian
genius. So he's just a guy.
I mentioned
he likes skulking in the shadows. Well, a typical episode will at
one point cut to a scene of him sitting in the dark. Then he'll
say that everything is going as planned or something even more vague.
Then the scene will end and that will be the last we see of him
until the following week.
What
we end up with is a character who looks the part and acts as sinister
and suave as a Bond villain but who doesn't actually have a plan.
We have an Affably
Evil character, without the evil. At many points, in
fact, he actually helps our heroes. You know, that thing well-written
villains sometimes do before a last-minute double-cross, or before
cleverly playing the situation to their advantage. Like that, except
Dr King just helps them and never mentions it again. Time and time
again I kept waiting for him to stick in the knife and twist
it but no, he really was just being nice.
At
one point he crashes an engagement part (well, that's pretty villainous,
you think, until someone mentions he was invited) and,
with an evil smirk, toasts the couple with some sweet and
thoughtful words. Then he never bothers them again.
The
fiend!
But
at least he sounds like a villain, even though he's mostly harmless.
A typical exchange with Dr King will go something like this:
KING:
Here, I made you a pie.
YOU: I don't really like pie.
KING: Oh, you'll like this one. BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
YOU: My God, this pie is delicious!
KING: I'm glad you like it.
YOU: Err… thanks?
KING: And here, have some money.
YOU: Really?
KING: Do you like my watch? Take it, it's yours.
This
all seems mighty suspicious, so you wait for him to spring his diabolical
trap… only he never does. The pie is fine, the watch isn't
a bomb and you the spend the money on a little home foot spa. The
end.
Dr
King – not so much a villain as a really weird ally.
There
are actually two genuine allies I haven't mentioned yet who help
out the Chiklis clan. We've got George, Chiklis's best friend. He
has only two character traits: he's divorced and he loves to deliver
exposition. He gets demoted to sidekick the second Chiklis gets
superpowers.
Then
there's Stephanie's lab assistant Katie, whose only role in life
is to look pretty and ask Stephanie questions to which they both
know the answer.
Yes,
add ‘exposition' to the list of things the writers can't seem
to grasp, under ‘character motivation' but before 'doing things'.
George and Katie exist only to exposit. They're also supposed to
be plucky comic relief but this only amounts to exposition delivered
in a funny way, which is to say it is not funny at all. But they're
not the only offenders. Many shows have a character whose only job
is to explain things and still make them work. The trouble is, in
No Ordinary Family every character is that character.
I rewatched
the pilot episode in preparation for writing this (and I still don't
know Chiklis's name) and tried to spot the percentage of dialogue
designed to explain something. And, while I still can't be sure,
it's probably close to 100%. Some lines exist only to establish
a fact about something or someone. When we first hear Daphne speak
she's asking to be spared a family holiday, requesting instead that
they Photoshop her in after the fact. A moment later, when her mother
expresses surprise that she has a boyfriend, she says "Just
because you Twitter-stalk me, it doesn't mean you know everything
about my life." These lines are so awkward I'm surprised the
actress was able to physically deliver them without choking. Does
this count as 'exposition'? It doesn't explain anything about the
plot or the setting so probably not. But it does cack-handedly establish
a fact, specifically that Daphne is a teenage girl who has a passing
familiarity with technology and boys. She sends text messages on
the Facebooks, people! You need to know this! But then the next
scene features Chiklis persuading his family to go on a plane ride
with him and he tells Daphne she does nothing but text all the time.
So it's not just that they had to awkwardly explain Daphne's use
of social networking and phone messaging services, they felt the
need to explain it twice - in the space of about twenty
seconds.
The
pilot episode makes heavy use of Chiklis explaining chunks of the
story to-the-camera in the form of a talking head confessional.
And when that cuts away it becomes a voice-over narrating the story.
Luckily they drop this in subsequent episodes but it still makes
an important point. Chiklis does his opening 'once upon a time'
narration of their lives before the plane crash, then it shows his
family's plane about to crash, then Chiklis takes us back in time
to before the plane crash again, so he can explain the backstory.
It seems a little redundant to flash forward in time and then flash
back again to the same spot - they obviously thought that without
something exploding within the first ten seconds audiences would
get bored and wander out into the street - but what the hell, let's
go with it. It's a pilot – they have a lot of ground to cover,
a whole cast of characters to set up, they might have to sacrifice
storytelling elegance for the sake of time. But what's the story
being told here? How they got on the plane. But the explanation
amounts to "We got on the plane and then we were on the plane."
The only step before that is "We were an unhappy family so
we got on the plane".
Chiklis
shows us camcorder footage of his family frolicking in the back
garden (a scene so forced and corny it looks like an antidepressant
advert) with a football. Chiklis says "Everything was great".
So we get a flashback within a flashback and Chiklis
explaining what everything means. Then there is a typically pathetic
scene in which Chiklis tries to bond with his son by standing in
his doorway forlornly fondling the same ball. And Chiklis says "Do
you want to play some catch with your old man?" deftly establishing
why he's standing there holding a football and that they're
father and son -- but JJ doesn't want to play! So Chiklis stands
in Daphne's doorway fondling the ball and poses the same question.
Then he stands in the doorway of his bedroom and asks his wife if
she wants to play. Then he stands in the open doorway of his house
and asks a passing spaniel if it wants to play with him but the
dog runs away and Chiklis is left staring after it, looking like
he's about to cry. Those bastards! And they won't eat his
signature scrambled eggs!
Do
you get it yet? They don't spend a lot of time together as a family.
Well, maybe you don't get it because as inevitably as rain at a
British picnic Chiklis's disembodied voice explains "We weren't
spending a lot of time together as a family." Cut to them walking
towards a plane with Chiklis explaining why they should get on the
plane - because Daphne texts too much and nobody wants to play with
me - even though they're in the process of getting on the plane
so presumably he's already convinced them of all this. Then narrator-Chiklis
chimes in with: "And that's how we ended up on the plane."
Slow
down, you got on a plane? Jesus Christ, this isn't LOST.
We don't need a whole flashback to before your holiday just to establish
that you decided to go on holiday and we don't need to have it explained
why. You could have just had Chiklis standing in the doorway and
his son asking him to go away before he even opens his God-damn
mouth. You could have cut that whole scene and just had a two-minute
exchange between the family as they're already up in the plane that
subtly establishes they don't have the best relationship. Have them
make awkward small talk, have a brief disagreement break out, have
them sit in silence avoiding eye-contact. Then have Daphne whip
out her God-damn phone without anyone fucking telling her she's
using her phone. Maybe, just maybe, the audience might be able to
assume that this middle-class white American family live in the
suburbs, maybe you don't need to show us what life was like pre-vacation.
What
do we have next? Chiklis talking to Exposition George about how
he doesn't have a very good relationship with his family!
It's
not even that they shoe-horn clunky exposition into the dialogue
to convey the exposition. It's that they use every method
of conveying exposition at once. Talking heads, narration,
flashbacks, the best friend, another flashback and clunky
dialogue. You know how they say in writing "show don't tell"?
What do you think they would say about show and tell? And
they don't just awkwardly cram in the information there once. They
do it practically every scene. Every scene is like the last three
or four scenes I described. They don't use these techniques just
to establish story points, they use them to reiterate story
points, over and over, since they clearly have absolutely zero faith
in the audience's ability to retain information for more than ten
seconds.
And
some of these methods are so hackneyed! The first line of nearly
every episode is George saying "So let me get this straight..."
That old chestnut. There are scenes in which characters sit down
and share information they both already know. Nothing glaringly
obvious can happen without a character pointing it out. Nothing
can happen at all without a character talking about it. Fucking
terrible lines like, "As you know, you are my brother," and "After
all, we are married." I mean not exactly those words but that egregious.
Even
when Daphne reads people's minds it turns out they were conveniently
thinking in exposition. I can only hear my thoughts but
at any given time they sound like: "Team-by-team reporters
baffled trump tethered crop look at that low plane! Fine then. Uh
oh overflow population common group but it'll do save yourself serve
yourself world serves its own needs listen to your heart bleed."
Even
if people's thoughts took the form of coherent internal monologue,
Daphne is in high school. Every time she tries to read the mind
of a teenage boy she should be hearing:
"Whoa, a girl is talking to me! Man, she's gorgeous. I wonder
what she looks like naked. God, I'm so horny and alone. No-one understands
me. Wait, she's stopped talking. What was she saying? Quick say
something cool. Monkeybutler! No, that's stupid. What the fuck does
monkeybutler have to do with anything?"
So
we have a superhero who refuses to wear a costume, his family who
are all super but refuse to be heroes, a whole cast of characters
who either act like idiots when the plot dictates or treat the audience
like idiots when it's their turn to speak, an evil villain who does
nothing but help out and a concept lifted straight from three better
superhero stories.
They couldn't even rely on the geek factor to save their show because
anyone familiar with superhero narratives will be yelling at the
screen because Spider-man faced the same problem and solved it in
five minutes with no help from his wife or avoided it completely
by virtue of dressing as Spider-man.
The
sad truth is that No
Ordinary Family
is desperately trying to imitate so many things at once. It knows
that information needs to be conveyed and shoves it all into the
dialogue so that it sounds nothing like human speech. It realises
that characters should all have different agendas but following
them leads to nothing but frustration as they nonsensically refuse
to co-operate or share basic information with each other. It fills
its world with scheming villains but doesn't understand what they're
supposed to do beyond the superficial details like smirking from
the shadows. And when No
Ordinary Family
doesn't offend the audience's intelligence it just plain offends
through sexist characterisation.
It
desperately apes The Incredibles and Heroes without
realising what made those stories great, the assured storytelling
and the well-drawn characters with convincing motivations.
It would be like if someone made a rip-off of The Lord of the
Rings but forgot to include a Ring of Power stand-in. So the
characters are just trudging from one end of the continent to the
other without knowing where they're going or why. People keep saying
things like "I'm tired," and "Can we go home yet?"
but the wizard replies "No - we must keep going." Only
we later find out that the wizard had no idea what they're doing
either. The protagonist becomes distracted and paranoid and his
burden gets heavier but it's already been established that there
is no ring. Also the wizard only ever uses his staff to light camp
fires, orcs wave to them as they tramp past but never attack and
the ranger is played by Michael Chiklis.
No
Ordinary Family
is the equivalent of the cucumber in the boxer shorts: it looks
the part - especially if you squint - and promises a great ride
but in the long term it can't deliver the goods.
Still,
it's campy fun – there are some good chuckles to be had, most
of them at the show's expense. The sight of an obviously CG Chiklis-puppet
flinging himself through the air, his shiny head glinting in the
sun is one surreal and silly enough to be worth the price of admission.
And if you're a fan of superheroes it's worth checking out, if only
as an example of how not to do it. It's actually kind of like Watchmen
in that, as I said before, it asks "What if this really happen?"
but sadly it's so paper-thin and so heavily reliant on tired movie
clichés it ends up being sillier than the actual Fantastic
Four movies. There's really no worse way to fail, at anything.
It
does become horribly muddled towards the end as the number of episodes
the series has to finish telling its story is cut in half. People
get pregnant and give birth an episode later, dead characters come
back to life for no adequately-explained reason (especially jarring
given how much the show loves to over-explain) -– finally
we're stuck with a frankly arrogant cliff-hanger finale (considering
their run had already been cut short) followed by deserved cancellation.
Yes,
deserved. I started catching up with True Blood after I
finished with No
Ordinary Family
and, no exaggeration needed, that show offered more character development,
atmosphere, surprise and plot in three episodes than No
Ordinary Family
managed in its entire series, mostly because True Blood
trusts the audience to retain information for more than 10 minutes.
Yet
with its light, inconsequential tone and goofy charm No
Ordinary Family
has won a special place in my heart that it did nothing to earn.
It's like a candy heart. Sugary, ephemeral, no nutritional value,
but always ready to tell you it loves you in a completely hollow,
manufactured way. And in my own way I love it back.
I wouldn't
recommend you watch it illegally online, where every hilarious minute
is readily available after a little rummaging. That is a crime (original
draft of this read 'That is crume', which sounds like the rite of
a fierce warrior race). No, don't steal it. Buy it on DVD, watch
it, then give it as a present to a friend you don't particularly
like.
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